Episode one Review

Basha46 · Posts: 1 Join date: 2009-09-27

Ok let's break it down

[ Visual]

Your static needs some work. That's a definite. over all I mean you just need to work on that.

[ Story]

Eh it's a bit tacky but then this was just the first episode so Who knows maybe it will get better.

[Va/Audio/ SFX /BGM]
Voice acting- I'm not an expert on voice acting But ....You might want to due quality control on mics [Don't kill me D:] I'm gonna basically say quality control on everything Even the script Nyx had a point about the whole " TODUAY" thing.

SFX - No quality control there to be honest I loved them :3

BGM- Okay I'm so glad that you decided to the original Shooting Star Song instead of "American idiot" I love you for that...I do...:]... But You have music all over the place "Come" by namie amuro I don't think would be appropriate Find Bg music or instrumental of the song. The announcement about contacting you should remain for commercial break...or at least in a separate video.

But once again The only thing that needs work is Quality control on everything.

But to be honest it was ok 3/5.

Admin · Subject: Re: Episode one Review Mon Sep 28, 2009 2:16 am

Basha46 wrote:

Ok let's break it down

[ Visual]

Your static needs some work. That's a definite. over all I mean you just need to work on that.

[ Story]

Eh it's a bit tacky but then this was just the first episode so Who knows maybe it will get better.

[Va/Audio/ SFX /BGM]
Voice acting- I'm not an expert on voice acting But ....You might want to due quality control on mics [Don't kill me D:] I'm gonna basically say quality control on everything Even the script Nyx had a point about the whole " TODUAY" thing.

SFX - No quality control there to be honest I loved them :3

BGM- Okay I'm so glad that you decided to the original Shooting Star Song instead of "American idiot" I love you for that...I do...:]... But You have music all over the place "Come" by namie amuro I don't think would be appropriate Find Bg music or instrumental of the song. The announcement about contacting you should remain for commercial break...or at least in a separate video.

But once again The only thing that needs work is Quality control on everything.

But to be honest it was ok 3/5.

LOL, i wont kill you. your review was fairly honest, and despite what nyx said, she was being a douche. you raise some good points however (though i dont agree with you on the SFX T_T they were bad)

Music is definitely an issue, though i like the linkin park instrumentals other songs just felt out of place to me. Make up was only good for when the scouts lookedl ike they were gonna win. and the transforamtion song doesnt feel right either. i did find a new song that ithink others will appreciate in its place.

As for "Tuh-day on sailor moon" this, believe it or not, is an accent. ive been all over america, and all over the world, and each country, and even state has its own accents and ways of speaking. i dont discriminate against VAs just because one person says "Tuh day" instead of "TWO DAY" because i have grown up with people with friends who sproke spanish as their first language, and dated boys with chamorro as their first. as long as someone is understandable, and they have a voice for the part, i dont see the point in discriminating.

and just to throw this out there, anyone who has a proble, with the way that any of of my VAs speak can kindly shove sharp objects in fun places. Its rude to pick on someone because of the way they speak, and if your too narrow minded to accept any voice actors who dont speak the same way you do, then id suggest getting off the internet, and watching a local station.